Beautiful. This took me right back in time to my own Allison, circa 2006, age 23. I loved the exposition, setting and backstory/buildup. It really made me care, hooked me in and prepared me for seeing her. Something about being kids and saying ‘if we’re still alone at 40’ got me. I think it’s just the mood I’m in lately; nostalgic. Good material. Thank you.
Beautiful. This took me right back in time to my own Allison, circa 2006, age 23. I loved the exposition, setting and backstory/buildup. It really made me care, hooked me in and prepared me for seeing her. Something about being kids and saying ‘if we’re still alone at 40’ got me. I think it’s just the mood I’m in lately; nostalgic. Good material. Thank you.
Michael Mohr
‘Sincere American Writing’
https://michaelmohr.substack.com/